I’m giving you this one because I adore the blow job scene in Fire Woman. I’m giving you this one because I
think I pretty much had my say that fateful day when I went off about something a friend had said.No. A blow job--to me, mind you--is not just a means to an end. It is not the treat you give the man to earn your orgasm.
To me the blow job is power and submission. Art and love and lust and pleasure in motion. How can my tongue curling along his cock make him jump that way? How can the smell of him make me want to go faster, longer, deeper? How can the sounds he make stir my insides as surely as his own tongue or finger or cock could?
I have no idea, but it does. The noises he makes when I get him right there and then make him wait. I think there are times I’ve nearly come from listening. The way he sounds and looks and moves when I’m sucking his cock is the epitome of sexy to me. Truly.
The response to my little “No Woman” blog was staggering. So many women came out to say, “Hell, yeah!”. On the blog and behind the scenes. Soon, I had so many positive comments, I wanted to harness all that. And thanks to some poking from one of my very best friends, the Blow Hard Tour was born. Those women who stepped right up to shout, we love to blow! were invited to come and play with us. What happened then was history. There are pins and tees and a prize packet. It’s a good, messy, sticky time if you ask me.
So, here you go, I choose Fire Woman from Playing With Fire as my tour story. It’s written from a male POV and it is one that I hope comes close, so to speak. My man proofed it for me before I subbed it for the book. He gave me the nod of approval. And then he gave me something else, but that is another blog.
My character, she does it because she wants it. Wants his cock in her mouth as surely as she wants it in her body. Which is something I can relate to. It’s a simple scene. Not pages and pages of details. But it is hot. To me. It’s very, very hot. And that is what fire and blow jobs have in common. The hot factor. Just ask a man who’s been sucked but good by his woman. (I've marked it with the tour logo if you want to skip right to the good stuff, btw).
Underneath it all, I’m a very nice girl. I am sweet and kind and funny and yes, sometimes I am very, very shy. Painfully so at times, if you must know. But shy or not, I’m not ashamed to say, at heart--I am, and always will be, a real cocksucker.
Tomorrow is the Alison Tyler stop on our tour. You'll have no problem seeing her. She'll be the
jaw dropping brunette in red. Most likely wearing a pin that says "Blow Me". Heh heh.XOXO
Sommer
Fire Woman
Sommer Marsden
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Blow Hard Tour dates:
Sommer Marsden March 31st
Alison Tyler April 1st (no joke)
Dakota Rebel April 2nd
Erobintica April 3rd
Cora Zane April 4th
Heidi Champa April 5th
EllaRegina April 6th
Marina St. Clare April 7th
Emerald April 8th
Kristina Wright April 9th
Isabel Kerr April 10th
Neve Black Aprill 11th
43 comments:
Wow. Just...wow.
So, so hot. Smoking. On fire. Smoldering. (told myself I would avoid any fire/heat puns, but there are no other words that describe it quite as well)
Hehehe - the fire trucks just went by my house (honestly - they did - even the ladder truck!)
Let the festivities begin!
My character, she does it because she wants it. Your character is my type of character.
And how did you know what I was going to be wearing tomorrow? Jeez.
XXX,
Alison
Whenever I read your stuff, the dialogue just blows me away.
Blows me ... geddit? But really, it does. Your characters always sound so natural and I love how in this, the prose is peppered with great little speech fragments.
“Little attention here, Zach!” the chief called.
I think that ordinariness of speech is so hard to capture.
Also - smokin! As ever.
...wow...goodness...just...
**brb...gonna go dunk my head in the sink**
That was just delicious. Scrumptious. Decadent. And all those words Haven used too!!
oh, thx, KL. you and Haven are making me blush!
I had to go in and change it. I guess I got all excited and I originally typed "Welcome to the Blow JOB Tour 2009!"
I have fixed it. It now says the proper thing "Welcome to the Blow HARD Tour 2009!"
Heh heh. Got carried away and all blow job crazed ;)
Thx for coming everyone. No. I'm really glad you are here. But I also wanted to say thanks for *coming* because it makes me smile ;)
xoxo
s
hey, j.m.! we must have crossed posted. thx. and hi there :) you are dripping on the floor, btw...
xoxo
s
KL said..."Whenever I read your stuff, the dialogue just blows me away."
And I so totally agree with her. I mean, I know this is not a blow job story, but in Sommer's piece in J is for Jealousy, the dialogue is just awesome:
“You picked out this outfit,” I snapped back. My temples throbbed from the force of my anger. What I really wanted to do was punch him.
“You never complain about me buying you outfits,” he ground out between clenched teeth. His normally handsome profile looked dangerous in the green glow of the dashboard.
“If you buy me a dress that’s cut down to my belly button with absolutely no back to speak of, I assume you’re okay with me wearing it. I assume that you will not end up a raving, jealous lunatic by the end of the night.”
“I’m not jealous, Brenda. And for the record, there’s a difference between dressing provocatively and acting like a cat in heat.”
“I didn’t do that,” I hissed....
See?
XXX,
AT
I had to mail Sommer with incoherent exclamation marks and wows theother day when I read this!
Unbelievable hotness.
Ooh, yummy fireman!
Good job, Smut Girl!! ; )
oh, yes, jo! you made my day with that. i learned you and i are laundry twins. just for those who don't know
putting away laundry = secretly reading smut ;)
hi, cora! hi, jeremy!
xoxo
s
I hot, hot, hot this piece, Sommer!
I made an announcement today in my Spin class about the tour de blow. Maybe we'll get some new ready for action readers!
This is so fun. As if it wouldn't be with you as our Blow Job Captain, right?
oh, and I've been wearing my pink pin all morning whilst running errands - the bank, the library, the gas station, Target, Starbucks, the natural food store...
now time for
ressesse - which is my word
I'm picturing Robin in her Blow Hard button and Neve announcing the BHT in her spin class. Love it! Looooove it! Power to the um...blowers? Whatever. I think that is great.
And a belated ta to you, AT. I got so flustered with your praise i forgot to say thank you.
I just got back from library. Where i was supposed to go to concentrate on new book. Phone rang, it was one of my favorite people (her initials are Alison Tyler) so spent majority of trip huddled in back of stacks whispering and laughing into cell phone like some kind of sex pervert!
Lost my damn handcuff earring, too. so sad.
But i did get 1.5 chapters done. And had sexy secret chat in the stacks. Good day, I'd say ;)
xoxo
s
p.s. Lurkers! don't be shy. talk to us. Play with us. Blow with us. We do not bite. At first.
A wild, delicious, poetic story, Sommer!
SO HOT
Oh my god. I feel so ashamed!
I forgot my pin!!!
I just have to make sure I wear it tomorrow...hmm...and think I have the perfect pink wear to coordinate with it!
I wonder how many coworkers will be eyeing my chest.....*wink*
Hi DGS! Hi Isabel! :) Thank you for coming! God, that never gets old, does it??? ;) LOL.
xoxo
s
Hey, Sommer. Sorry I'm late. I had school today. Love love that story. Just read it a few days ago and thought it was so hot. So happy to be part of all the fun. Can't wait for my turn.
Hi again,
In honor of the first un-zip the zippers day, I'm not wearing any pants with zippers. Hell, why wear any pants at all, right? Takes pants off. I think that's called, easy access, baby...:-)
Hi Heidi! Did you wear your button to school? Hmmm??? ;)
Did anyone else just see Neve zip past sans pants? God. Spinning really pays off...
whew
xoxo
s
So so SCORCHING! LUV the black light detail! You really blew (!) me away!
Really, between your post text and the story I don't know how there's anything left to be said on this matter.
But I know we'll all try very very hard to come up with something!
My button is on my book bag, so I did have it with me in class today. Gotta represent!!
Nice!!! Hot hot hot interaction between the two of them, and not just sexually — I loved the way he called her "baby" while she was sucking his cock. It managed to be scorching hot and touching at the same time (to me).
Thanks for the fabulous kickoff Sommer!!
Whew! I'd say you got the guy thing down quite nicely, Sommer.
Well done!
Oh, try very, very hard, ER. I think you'll raise something if you try.
I love, love, love that my little hot pink BHT buttons are getting around. Love it! Yay, Heidi.
And Emerald. You are v. intuitive. That is exactly why I love this story so much. I love that exact reason you mentioned. ;)
xoxo
s
p.s. our lurkers are not talking
:( but they are reading! Our numbers are fab, thank you all for playing along!
oh, craig, we came at the same time. heh heh. so i'll back up and say, hi and thanks!
xoxo
s
"No. Not that." Aw Sommer, now I'm very, very sad.
Hi Sommer - sorry I'm late to the fire! I couldn't wait to get home to read this. I couldn't do it earlier 'cause it would have definitely set the work puter aflame!
I had my button with me today, too. I couldn't wear it out in the open, but it was secretly pinned somewhere!
Great story! Great opening BJ Day!
Thanks so much for coordinating all of this!!
I'm SO glad I thought ahead and didn't check this at work!!! I can imagine that call from security. Although, maybe I could just share the enjoyment, huh?
glad you are secretly pinned, Marina! ;)
Cory, I'm proud to be NSFW. I'm sure some of your office mates would have thanked you, though ;)
Thanks for visiting the tour. Welcome! :)
xoxo
s
Sommer, this has been such fun - and it's only just beginning! So nice to have something fun & joyful & all that when it seems the rest of my world is wanting to implode - golly gee wiz - what was it that AT said about smut the other day? Brings you back to what's truly important - or something like that.
Blow on!
What a great start to a hot, hot, hot tour. :) Excellent story, lady. And such a great turnout for the Blow Hard kickoff!
yum!!!
raven
(sans intelligent comments. is contemplating blowing. or is that sucking?)
Sommer, really great. Liked the subtle use of the hose reference and I agree with Emerald, the use of "baby" by the guy just made me melt. That's the term my guy and I use for each other so there I was, thinking it was me having all the fun.
Sorry to be a day late. Home with a wicked virus and I fell asleep in the chair last night (ouch). Hoping to create my own "blow" moment before the tour is over! Thanks for the inspiration!
Hi, KW, Raven & cerulean! Thanks for popping in. Today's stop is trollopville ;)
I am late to my own blog. suffering technical difficulties...again!
Feel better cerulean :)
xoxo
s
Had to stop here before I caught up with the tour.
Damn that was one FINE HAWT PIECE OF...writing. LOL.
Love the idea of the invisible ink and the black light. I really REALLY want to try that.
Do I need to pay you royalties if I do? *gets out checkbook*
Hi Angell, welcome to the tour. The black light/pen idea is totally on the house. Go forth and um...blow!
;)
xoxo
s
i'm a bit late to the party, but that was a fine story ;-)
you are not late at all! I'm glad you are joining us :) Yay!
xoxo
sommer
Man, you are so fuckin' good! And yes, your dialogue is killer. I saw where AT posted some of your other dialogue from another story and was reminded of the amazing dialogue in Hot Child in the City.
Coming late to the party, but it's better to come late than not to come at all.
OH, thank you D.L. YOu are so sweet! I cannot wait for your book, I'm thrilled to be a part of it! And no worries being late. No such thing. We are just glad you (yeah, see, it never gets old) came! :)
xoxo
sommer
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